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Mini-Tutorial
Finishing Details |
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In March 2008, I finished Venus,
a painting I had been working on for some years.
I would like to share with you a
process that made the finishing touches a relatively easy
experience.
The Problem
In Venus, I began
painting her figure from direct from life. After changing
countries and models, I found it difficult to merge two, three,
and four different models into a cohesive image. Bits and pieces
didn't always go together.
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The Solution
Making studies always helps because the
studies help you focus on one aspect at a time, making it easier
to fully finish off the forms of such things as ears.
Simultaneously, the studies enable you to choose those elements
which best represent the end result you are after.
The last parts to finish on Venus
were her face, neck, and hair; absolutely crucial to get right. |
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The following pencil studies compared
to the finished oil details should be self-explanatory. Though,
there will be slight differences. For example, notice the little
dark mark in the pencil drawing of the ear. If I made that part
in the painting that dark, it would look like a black-head zit in
Venus' ear.
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Her right ear, tucked away in shadow,
far back around her head, was difficult. Ignoring it altogether
didn't look right, and when the details were not fully developed
it looked like a smudge. It was relatively simple to solve all
those problems in pencil. Once that study was done, it made the
painting much easier as well. |
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Again the dark area in the pencil drawing is darker than the
final version in paint; but the essence of the form and detail
are there.
At some stage, I did have part of her
lower lid quite dark but that gave a vampish quality to her
face.
On the right side of the pencil
drawing, you can see a simple sphere. I drew that in as a simple
reminder that an eye, after all, is no more than a ball in the
head. That really helps with how you think of the light hitting
the shape of the eye. |
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Surprising to me was how difficult it
was to paint her hair. The position of her head thrown back did
not lend easily to shaping lots of hair. In reality, 90% of her
hair was simply hidden behind her head. In an earlier stage, she
looked like she had a short hair cut--not very Venus-like.
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For those of you who paint, you probably
have experienced difficulty shaping saturated oranges and
reds--they do not lend themselves to a large range of light and
dark. Too light, and hue becomes a cool pinkish color. And too
dark, it becomes gooey brown. Even though the pencil drawing
doesn't deal with color, the tone of getting the details right
really helped me judge how light and dark to make the color of her
neck. |
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It is also much easier to get a sense
of shape in pencil. I refer you to two tutorials on form:
Feeling the Form and
The Conceptual Transformation from Touch to Sight. I find that
it is not the easiest thing to do directly
painting from life, but once I see it clearly in pencil, it
doesn't seem difficult to get the form right in paint. |
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When you find yourself spending way too
much time trying to get the finishing details right, invest in
making detailed pencil drawings of the problem areas. You will
be glad you did. |
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I hope you enjoyed seeing the finished
product from a detailed way. Michael Newberry
New York, March 17, 2008 |
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